I have been using the colon extensively in this booklet, which should serve to illustrate its functions. Fowler defines the colon’s function as ‘delivering the goods invoiced in the preceding words’. For example: Here is our travel itinerary: London, Paris, Vienna, New Delhi.
The colon in its modern use is the equivalent of namely or that is, for example: Only one course of action remained: shoot to kill! Note: If the word following the colon is normally lower case, do not capitalise.
The colon is particularly useful when writing dialogue, allowing the attribution to precede the quote, for example: He turned to me and asked: ‘How will you get home from here?’
Do not subordinate the colon to a lesser mark of punctuation than a full stop, in other words, make sure the goods delivered by the colon consist of all the words from the colon to the end of the sentence. Do not use two colons in the same sentence. Do not include any other words besides the ‘goods’. Do not use the colon when a semi-colon or dash would serve the purpose of separating the major elements of a sentence.
The semi-colon is weighted half-way between a comma and a full stop, used principally as a substitute for the conjunction when the writer is ‘on a roll’, building tension, for example: The breakers were tumbling in; he could feel the salt spray on his lips; it tasted good. But the fishing boat was in trouble, shipping water, perhaps; or had its motor failed?
In the foregoing example, semi-colons are used instead of full stops or conjunctions while the thought is continuous; when the direction of thought changes, the conjunctions but and or are called into use. The semi-colon is also useful for marking divisions in lists, for example: Our journey took us through Calcutta and Bombay, India; Athens, Greece; Munich, Germany; and finally to Scotland.
The semi-colon is not recommended for dialogue, being somewhat too formal.
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